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I posted this on the Steam forum too but I suppose it also fits here. It's a short story of a guy going on a trade run set in Kenshi, let me know what you think of it, I'm somewhat new to writing action scenes, http://falling-cow.deviantart.com/art/G ... -414498409

I not sure, but as is Kenshi related i guess you could had even posted in the general part.

It's here now so oh well.

It is now complete. It's a lot of words. Like, ten thousand... ish.

Meant to put these up here a while ago. Three stories based in the Kenshi world. Grit is by far the longest, the rest branch off. Dust is currently incomplete.

Grit - http://surgeon-scone.deviantart.com/art ... Scone&qo=3

Dust - http://surgeon-scone.deviantart.com/art ... Scone&qo=2

Wind - http://surgeon-scone.deviantart.com/art ... Scone&qo=1

I updated and finished Dust. (See above for link)

I will finally finish Sand next. Pretty sure that was what I called it.

Also, any and all feedback, good or bad, is appreciated. I need to know what you do and don't like or I'll never address those issues.

(Here's the link again, just in case)
Dust - http://surgeon-scone.deviantart.com/art ... -425563659